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SirDerangedReindeer, 22 Feb 2008 08:42 am

End Chapter! Hooray, end of the first chapter. (Yeah, I know that this is a short chapter, but it's just the intro chapter) The next chapter is a flashback, and will get into some fun character development. (No, it really will be fun. :'D) But before we get into that I'll do a quick spoof comic, which I'll post on Monday, summing up this chapter.

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Panel 1: What a boring panel. Theo looks weird. Jack has a Jack-expression. Finally.

Panel 2: Mills looks... Creepy. xD But I enjoy how he turned out all over this page.

Panel 3: Theo looks good here. Mills doing pouty face while getting elbowed in the ribs.

Panel 4: Everyone looks good, yay. Should've drawn bricks in the background, maybe... And in case you can't read the small text...

Mills: Yeah. (can you stop elbowing me? D:< )
Theo: (you two are making me uncomfortable...) Oh... Well... Let's go!

The story of your life, Theo, the story of your life.

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PS. Sorry this is a little late.

User's Comments:

sacredsinner, 22 Feb 2008 08:46 am

how weird... right when i get on you update! maybe i really am stalking you!! but i'm certainly not aware of it so i must be sleep-stalking... AWKWARD. haha.

i think if i had theo as a friend, it'd be terribly fun to tease him. just cause he seems like the type to just whine and not do anything about it.

SirDerangedReindeer, 22 Feb 2008 08:59 am

@SacredSinner I just lol'd at you being the first to comment again. xDD

Oh, Theo is the type to whine and not do anything. He spends his whole life feeling awkward. :'D Yay, Theo.

Frostwings, 22 Feb 2008 09:01 am

Actually, I found your text easier to read for some reason, lol less jagged perhaps xD Heh, and the last time I heard someone say pout outloud because I wouldn't give him any starbursts...lol omg I ended up hooking up with that fool, it was just so cute <3

Beware the cute pouts <3

SirDerangedReindeer, 22 Feb 2008 09:07 am

@Emberwings Yeah, I tried to make it more easy to read on this page. Glad it actually is. xD

Good job. And I know what you mean. A few of my friends have killer pouts. Especially my ex did...

frayed1989, 22 Feb 2008 03:48 pm

Theo's freckles make me happy.

SirDerangedReindeer, 22 Feb 2008 10:06 pm

@Frayed ...They make me happy too. :'D

Iris Purple, 26 Feb 2008 03:20 am

lol, don't worry I can read it and that's all that matters!

Mind you I cant write, but I can read other peoples...unless it's the really tight loopy type that old people use...then I'm stuffed.

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